I am Larissa and I am 20 years old. I am an undergraduate student at UFMG. I started studying English when I was 12 and I liked it a lot, then I started tutoring at the school that I studied when I was 16. After that, I have decided to study Languages, majoring in English teaching because it is an area that I appreciate a lot. I love linguistics and the many subjects that I can learn with this area. At UFMG, I have taken part in a Project with the professor Adriana Tenuta, which was a great experience. At the present moment, I am an English teacher in an English course (FISK). Thais' Suggestions: I haven't found any grammar mistakes in your biodata. I think it was well written and it is very clear. I have some suggestions that maybe can improve your text.Maybe you could change this sentence " I started studying English when I was 12 and I liked it a lot , then I started tutoring at the school that I studied when I was 16 '' ' to I started studying English when I was 12 and I have always liked it ever since. When I was 16 I started tutoring at that same school. I think it was very good that you exposed what you have decided to study and why you chose it.The sentence" I love linguistics and the many subjects that I can learn with this area " could maybe be changed to I love Linguistics and also all the subjects that are related to that area. I think it would be good if you explained a little bit more about the project you were involved with professor Adriana and also why it was a great experience.
Finally, you could change the last sentence ''At the present moment, I am an English teacher in an English course (FISK).'' to I am and English teacher at FISK.
Second Version:
I am Larissa Santos Monteiro de Castro and I am an undergraduate student at UFMG, majoring in English teaching since it is an area that I appreciate a lot. This is my fourth semester at the university. I started studying English when I was 12, then, at the age of 16, I started tutoring at the same school. It was an opportunity that helped me to choose my career, so after that experience, I decided to study Languages. I love Linguistics and also all the subjects that are related to this area. At the present moment, I am an English teacher at FISK. From now on, I intend to keep studying as much as I can, in order to improve my English and learn more about the methodologies of teaching.
Final Version:
I am Larissa Santos Monteiro de Castro and I am an undergraduate student at UFMG, majoring in English teaching since it is an area that I appreciate a lot. This is my fourth semester at the university. I started studying English when I was 12, then, at the age of 16, I started tutoring at the same school. It was an opportunity that helped me to choose my career, so after that experience, I decided to study Languages. I love Linguistics and also all the subjects that are related to this area. At the present moment, I am an English teacher at FISK. From now on, I intend to keep studying as much as I can, in order to improve my English and learn more about the methodologies of teaching.
I am Larissa and I am 20 years old. I am an undergraduate student at UFMG. I started studying English when I was 12 and I liked it a lot, then I started tutoring at the school that I studied when I was 16. After that, I have decided to study Languages, majoring in English teaching because it is an area that I appreciate a lot. I love linguistics and the many subjects that I can learn with this area. At UFMG, I have taken part in a Project with the professor Adriana Tenuta, which was a great experience. At the present moment, I am an English teacher in an English course (FISK).
Thais' Suggestions:
I haven't found any grammar mistakes in your biodata. I think it was well written and it is very clear. I have some suggestions that maybe can improve your text.Maybe you could change this sentence " I started studying English when I was 12 and I liked it a lot , then I started tutoring at the school that I studied when I was 16 '' ' to I started studying English when I was 12 and I have always liked it ever since. When I was 16 I started tutoring at that same school.
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think it was very good that you exposed what you have decided to study and why you chose it.The sentence" I love linguistics and the many subjects that I can learn with this area " could maybe be changed to I love Linguistics and also all the subjects that are related to that area.
I think it would be good if you explained a little bit more about the project you were involved with professor Adriana and also why it was a great experience.
Finally, you could change the last sentence ''At the present moment, I am an English teacher in an English course (FISK).'' to I am and English teacher at FISK.Second Version:
I am Larissa Santos Monteiro de Castro and I am an undergraduate student at UFMG, majoring in English teaching since it is an area that I appreciate a lot. This is my fourth semester at the university. I started studying English when I was 12, then, at the age of 16, I started tutoring at the same school. It was an opportunity that helped me to choose my career, so after that experience, I decided to study Languages. I love Linguistics and also all the subjects that are related to this area. At the present moment, I am an English teacher at FISK. From now on, I intend to keep studying as much as I can, in order to improve my English and learn more about the methodologies of teaching.
Final Version:
I am Larissa Santos Monteiro de Castro and I am an undergraduate student at UFMG, majoring in English teaching since it is an area that I appreciate a lot. This is my fourth semester at the university. I started studying English when I was 12, then, at the age of 16, I started tutoring at the same school. It was an opportunity that helped me to choose my career, so after that experience, I decided to study Languages. I love Linguistics and also all the subjects that are related to this area. At the present moment, I am an English teacher at FISK. From now on, I intend to keep studying as much as I can, in order to improve my English and learn more about the methodologies of teaching.